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[whitepad]***700;400;700,400;;*7.5; m515,123 l515,124,531,124,535,122,542,120,548,119,552,117,559,115,564,113,565,113,569,112,573,110,575,110,577,108,579,107,581,107,584,104,588,102,591,99,589,99 e|********* m534,178 l534,191,536,195,536,198,537,199,537,202,538,202,538,204,539,206,541,207,541,208,542,209,543,212,548,217,550,221,552,223,553,225,555,227,555,229,557,230,558,232 559,233,559,245,560,247,560,275,559,276,558,276,558,277,556,279,550,279,549,278,549,277,548,277,547,276,546,274,543,271,537,266 e|********* m492,257 l492,262,493,263,493,268,494,272,494,273,497,277,497,278,498,278,498,279,500,279,501,278,503,277,504,277,510,272,518,266,519,265,519,264,520,262,520,255 e|********* m589,210 l598,210,598,211,600,211,600,212,601,212,601,213,604,216,604,219,605,219,605,224,604,225,603,225,603,226,592,234,591,235,588,236 e|********* m186,121 l183,125,183,128,181,134,178,137,177,142,176,144,174,147,173,149,173,151,171,153,170,155,169,156,167,159,166,162,164,163,162,167,161,168,158,170,157,172,155,173 154,174,152,175,150,177,146,178,140,181,137,183,134,184,132,185,130,185,131,183,163,167,164,167,166,165,168,165,171,163,176,162,195,155,196,154,197,154,199,152 201,152,203,151,205,149,203,149 e|********* m181,184 l193,182,197,182,197,181,198,181,199,180,198,180,191,188,191,190,189,197,188,199,188,201,187,203,186,207,186,213,185,215,184,219,183,224,183,227,182,231,181,233 181,241,180,242,180,265,181,274,181,275,182,276,195,276,194,275,189,269,186,266,185,266,182,264,181,263,181,262,180,262,176,258,175,258,175,257,174,257,174,255 173,254,172,254,172,253,170,250,165,241 e|********* m158,227 l161,224,162,224,166,222,168,220,180,214,186,213,195,207,198,207,198,211,197,214,196,216,195,219,193,221,192,224,192,225,190,226,184,235,182,237,182,238,180,240 178,244,174,248,173,250,173,251,170,254,169,256,167,258,166,260,164,262,161,267,162,266,178,255,179,253,181,252,182,251,183,251,194,243,206,231,208,227,210,225 211,223,213,222,214,220,218,216,219,214,230,203,236,200,239,198,241,196,243,195,252,189,255,188,257,186,260,184,262,183,265,181,270,179,273,178,276,176,280,174 286,172,288,171,293,169,298,168,305,165,307,165,310,163,313,162,315,161,318,160,320,160,325,159,329,157,333,156,337,154,340,153,343,153,345,152,348,152,348,151 e|********* m251,120 l251,123,253,127,253,135,255,142,257,151,259,158,261,168,263,171,264,173,264,176,266,176,266,175,271,171,272,171,278,166 e|********* m340,58 l339,64,338,67,338,88,336,92,331,114,331,116,324,141,318,161,296,213,287,225,285,226,278,233,278,234,277,234,290,228,292,226,293,226,296,224,298,223,300,221 304,218,308,216,310,214,311,214,313,212,314,212,316,210,317,210,319,208,323,206,324,205,326,204,328,204,328,206,325,208,315,221,314,223,313,223,313,224,307,233 307,234,305,236,305,240,304,242,303,245,301,249,300,252,300,255,298,259,298,261,297,263,297,285,299,281,299,278,301,276,301,273,302,272,303,270,303,269,305,268 306,266,314,260,316,260,318,259,319,258,321,257,324,257,326,259,328,260,329,261,332,263,332,264,331,265,331,267,329,269,329,270,328,271,328,276,326,278,326,280 325,281,325,282,324,284,324,286,323,288,322,291,321,293,321,295,320,297,320,302,319,303,318,305,318,308,317,310,317,317,315,323,315,331,314,331,314,333,313,335 313,336,292,336,291,335,289,335,289,334,287,330,286,327,286,309,287,308,287,307,288,307,288,305,304,305,304,306,307,306,308,307 e|********* m40,147 l40,178,41,200,41,233 e|********* m40,273 l41,274,41,283 e[/whitepad]

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