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老布

南冥勤奋,味道不错!

熊华禹

原帖由 书法初学者 于 2007-9-25 01:51 发表
不知字径多大？如属中字，3、4楼很不错！em1 如是小字，个人以为以求雅为上，不激不厉为佳。em22
中书网上周鸿图先生、书法江湖上蒙中先生的小行书很值得看看em22

字是中字，兄的意见都记下了！em13 em13

熊华禹

原帖由 老布 于 2007-9-25 09:36 发表
南冥勤奋,味道不错!

说勤奋，还是你啊！em1 em13

乐之山馆

[whitepad]***700;400;700,400;;*1.2; m67,44 l67,48,68,51,68,59,67,62,66,64,65,65,65,67,64,68,61,68,60,67,60,65,58,63,58,61,57,60,57,58,56,57,56,45,58,44,58,43,60,41 61,41,62,40,66,40,66,108,65,112,65,118,64,122,64,123,63,126,63,131,62,131,62,133,58,133,56,132,55,132,55,131,52,128,51,126,49,124,48,122 47,121,47,117,46,116,46,101,47,99,49,97,50,95,54,91,69,81,77,77,83,75,87,72,93,68,97,66,100,64,102,63,102,73,104,73,106,72,107,70 109,68,109,65,110,64,110,61,109,61,109,60,106,60,106,61,120,61,121,60,126,60,127,59,129,59,129,69,135,69,137,68,137,61,136,60,135,60,133,58 132,58,131,57,136,57,142,55,147,55,154,53,160,53,163,52,165,52,165,53,163,55,163,65,165,67,167,67,169,66,170,64,174,60,178,54,180,52,181,49 182,47,182,45,183,42,185,41,186,38,188,34,189,33,189,17,188,16,188,15,187,17,187,20,186,23,186,24,185,27,185,30,184,32,184,34,183,36,183,39 182,41,182,60,184,62,184,63,185,64,186,64,187,65,195,65,197,64,200,63,202,63,204,61,204,60 e|********* m47,208 l47,207,50,207,52,206,55,205,57,204,59,202,60,202,60,201,62,199,63,199,63,198,64,197,65,197,68,194,69,194,69,196,68,198,67,199,66,202,65,204 64,207,63,208,63,211,62,211,61,212,61,213,60,213,60,214 e|********* m51,221 l54,221,58,219,61,219,62,218,64,217,66,217,67,216,67,215,69,215,69,214 e|********* m49,224 l52,230,52,249,51,251,51,260,57,254,60,250,63,245,68,241,73,235,76,230,78,224,81,220,83,214,84,209,86,205,88,199,90,194,93,190,95,186,97,183 98,180,98,178,97,182,96,184,94,190,94,193,96,195,97,197,101,203,102,205,104,211,106,215,108,223,109,226,109,234,108,236,107,239,99,247,97,250,94,252 93,254,89,254,86,251,86,250,84,250,83,249,83,248,82,248,82,244,83,242,85,241,86,240,96,240,100,242,106,244,108,245,111,246,115,248,116,250,119,250 119,252,122,252,122,254 e|********* m167,219 l169,221,172,225,174,228,177,232,178,234,181,237,181,234,180,232,178,229,178,227,177,225,176,222,176,220,175,220,175,213,176,212,177,212,178,211,181,209,183,208 186,205,187,205,188,204,192,204,192,203,201,203,201,204,202,205,202,218,201,221,201,223,200,226,199,227,198,229,196,231,193,237,192,237,191,238,190,238,189,236 189,235,187,231,187,223,193,223,193,224,194,225,195,225,197,227,198,227 e|********* m259,210 l259,212,261,214,262,217,264,220,265,222,266,223,267,225,267,230 e|********* m278,213 l279,213,280,214,280,219 e|********* m305,163 l306,165,307,168,308,170,309,173,309,182,310,186,310,223,328,223,328,225,320,233,314,237,308,240,302,244,297,249,296,249 e|********* m395,195 l399,195,401,194,404,194 e|********* m385,205 l387,207,388,211,390,213,391,219,392,223,392,226,393,232,393,241,392,244,392,247,396,247,402,244,406,241,410,239,416,238,418,236,419,236,419,234,418,234,417,233 413,231,412,230,410,230,408,228,407,226,405,225,404,224,403,224,403,221,406,218,412,214,417,212,425,208,435,204,443,202,450,199,456,199,457,200,458,202,458,208 457,211,456,213,453,216,451,219,447,223,446,223,445,222,442,220,440,217,435,207,434,200,431,193,429,185,426,178,425,174,425,166,427,169,428,174,429,181,431,188 433,206,435,217,437,233,439,240,439,269,436,275,435,278,434,280,433,280,433,281 e|********* m495,205 l508,205,511,204,513,202,516,200,522,197,523,197,523,196,521,194,520,194,520,192,514,186,512,186,512,198,513,203,513,214,514,219,515,226,515,243,513,243,511,241 510,239,508,237,506,233,504,231,502,228,500,226,500,225,503,223,505,220,510,215,517,209,523,203,531,194,534,189,536,185,538,182,539,179,541,177,543,173,545,171 545,170,547,168,546,171,544,175,541,179,540,182,540,184,542,184,542,186,541,188,537,194,534,198,532,201,531,203,529,203,529,209,532,212,532,213,533,214,535,214 535,205,536,204,538,203,539,202,541,201,544,199,547,199,548,198,550,197,556,197,556,202,555,204,553,205,551,207,545,211,542,212,538,214,535,215,527,217,522,218 514,220,511,221,514,221,518,220,523,218,537,216,545,214,552,212,556,211,558,210,560,210,561,209,563,209,564,208,565,208,563,207,562,207,560,206,559,205,557,204 554,201,552,200,550,198,549,198,549,197,548,197,548,196,547,196,546,195,546,198,547,201,548,203,548,221,547,223,545,225,544,227,541,230,541,231,540,232,536,232 537,231,558,231,559,232,561,232,561,234,562,234,562,242 e|********* m613,181 l616,184,618,187,621,191,623,194,626,198,628,204,628,207,631,211,631,213,634,219,635,220,635,223,634,223,632,222,631,221,630,221,628,220,625,217,623,216,622,215 621,215,621,214,620,214,619,213,618,213,618,212,619,210,622,209,625,207,629,205,632,203,636,201,639,200,640,199,641,199,642,198,643,198,644,197,646,197,646,199 645,201,645,203,644,204,643,206,640,215,638,217,636,222,634,226,631,230,625,237,625,239,624,241,624,242,627,242,628,241,663,241,664,240,665,240,665,239,664,238 663,236,661,234,660,231,657,225,655,223,655,222,653,220,653,217,658,217,658,218,659,219,661,219,661,220,662,221,663,221 e|********* m25,295 l26,295,26,300,27,301,27,326,26,328,25,331,22,337,22,340,21,342,18,345,17,348,16,350,16,351,56,351,55,350 e|********* m34,307 l35,306,42,306,42,332,41,334,41,338,40,339,40,341,39,342,39,343,38,345,37,346,36,348,35,349,35,350,34,350,33,351,33,352,32,353,31,353,30,354 30,355,29,356,27,357,27,358,17,358,16,357,16,356,14,355,13,355,13,354,11,354,10,353,10,352,9,351,8,351,7,350,7,349,5,347,5,342,8,339 11,337,14,336,17,334,20,333,22,331,24,330,27,330,31,327,34,327,39,325,42,325,46,323,54,323,54,324,56,326,57,328,58,331,58,332,59,332,60,333 63,333,65,332,68,331,71,329,79,325,82,324,84,323,85,322,88,322,88,333,87,335,87,337,86,338,86,339 e|********* m126,310 l127,314,128,319,129,326,131,332,133,336,134,339,134,345,135,348,136,348,137,349,137,346,138,343,139,341,141,338,143,334,147,329,150,325,152,322,156,319,159,316 163,314,167,313,171,310,177,308,181,307,184,306,187,306,188,307,189,309,190,310,190,313,191,316,191,325,189,331,187,334,185,336,183,336,182,337,181,335,178,333 176,331,176,330,184,330,186,332,186,334,188,337,188,350,186,352,185,354,182,357,179,357 e|********* m265,316 l265,315,266,314,267,314,267,313,268,312,270,311,272,311,273,310,278,310,280,311,283,314,283,320,284,321,284,322 e|********* m302,309 l303,308,305,308,306,307,312,305,317,305,318,306,319,308,321,309,321,313,322,314,322,320 e|********* m275,329 l275,342,276,342,276,343,287,343,287,342,290,342,292,341,292,340,293,338,294,338,295,337,295,336,296,335,297,335,298,334,298,332,299,331,299,329 e[/whitepad]

熊华禹

原帖由 乐之山馆 于 2007-9-25 18:08 发表
[whitepad]***700;400;700,400;;*1.2; m67,44 l67,48,68,51,68,59,67,62,66,64,65,65,65,67,64,68,61,68,60,67,60,65,58,63,58,61,57,60,57,58,56,57,56,45,58,44,58,43,60,41 61,41,62,40,66,40,66,108,65,112 ...

求之不得！！！em13 em13 em13

老友鬼鬼

em1 em1 em1 em1 em1 em1

天池

大胆多了，看得出吸收了不少有益的东西，"黄河远上白云间"的确最佳，有度、有味，最好放我这儿帮你保存收藏。还有一些小小的建议：1楼拉开看后前5排不自然，“赵子昂”后稍好，后几幅一些连带也不很自然，我感觉，从我的角度说，对你最重要在体味“含蓄”，在吸取好的写法、经验的同时，建议也将“之”、“者”、“也”、“是”、“有”等写法丰富一下，避免损害整幅作品的“不尽之意味”em5 。

老布

天池出场了,讲的很有道理.

易晓亮

很好,向你学习!em1 em1 em1

huangzhendong

[whitepad]***700;400;700,400;;*9; m156,85 l156,101,160,101,160,100,161,100,161,99,162,99,162,98,164,98,164,96,165,96,165,95,166,95,166,94,167,94,168,92 e|********* m184,80 l185,80,185,88,186,88,186,89,190,89,190,88,191,88,192,87,194,87,194,85,195,85 e|********* m216,74 l217,74,217,73,220,73,220,72,222,72,222,74,224,74,224,79,223,79,223,80,222,80,222,82,221,82,221,83,220,83,219,84,219,85,218,85,217,86,217,87 215,87,214,88,214,89,212,89,211,90,211,91,209,91,209,92,207,92,207,93,206,94,205,94,204,95,204,96,202,96,200,98,195,98,194,99,192,99,191,100 191,101,190,102,188,102,187,103,186,103,183,106,181,106,181,107,180,108,174,108 e|********* m137,120 l137,123,136,123,136,124,135,124,135,125,134,125,134,126,133,127,132,127,132,129,131,129,131,137,132,137,134,139,138,139,138,138,140,138,140,137,141,137,141,136 143,135,143,134,145,133,145,132 e|********* m165,124 l165,123,168,123,171,122,172,122,174,120,175,120,177,119,181,119,182,118,184,117,185,117,188,116,192,114,196,114,197,113,199,113,201,111,203,111,204,110,206,110 207,109,208,109,209,108,211,108,212,107,215,107,216,106,217,106,218,105,220,105,223,104,226,104,227,103,239,103,239,104,240,105,240,110,242,112,242,113,244,115 244,117,225,117,224,118,220,118,220,119,219,119,216,120,215,120,213,121,209,121 e|********* m171,140 l171,143,170,143,170,145,176,145,178,144,186,142,188,142,191,140,192,139,193,139,194,138,196,138,197,137,198,137,199,136,202,136,204,134,206,134,206,133,207,132 209,132,211,130,213,130,214,129,215,129,215,139,214,139,214,140,213,142,212,142,212,143,211,144,210,146,209,147,204,153,202,154,201,155,201,156,200,157,200,158 198,158,198,159,191,159 e|********* m184,156 l184,159,193,159,193,166,195,166,195,178,197,178,197,211,196,211,196,215,195,215,195,216,164,216,164,215,163,215,162,214,162,213,160,212,160,211,159,211,159,210 158,210,158,209,157,208,157,207,156,207,156,205,155,203 e|********* m146,181 l143,181,143,182,140,182,138,183,138,188,152,188,152,187,155,187,155,186,158,186,159,185,160,185,161,184,163,184,163,183,164,183,167,182,168,182,168,181,170,181 171,180,173,179,175,177,177,177,177,176,181,176,185,174,187,174,189,173,191,173,192,172,199,172,200,171,203,171,203,170,207,170,207,169,211,169,211,168,212,168 214,167,218,167,219,166,220,166,220,165,222,165,222,164,225,164,225,163,238,163,238,167,220,167 e|********* m351,111 l351,119,350,120,350,121,358,121,360,120,371,120,373,119,378,119,380,118,381,117,384,117,384,116,385,116,386,115,387,115,388,114,392,114,393,113,394,113,395,112 398,112,400,111,401,111,403,110,404,110,408,109,409,108,413,107,414,106,425,106,425,105,428,105,429,106,430,106,430,163,429,163,429,168,428,171,428,172,427,172 427,176,426,176,426,180,425,180,425,184,424,184,424,187,423,187,422,189,422,191,421,192,421,194,420,194,420,196,419,196,419,197,418,197,418,198,417,199,416,201 416,202,415,202,415,203,413,203,412,204,410,204,410,205,401,205,401,204,398,204,398,203,396,203,394,202,389,202,389,201,385,201,383,200,379,200,378,199,377,199 376,198,375,198,374,197,373,197,372,196,372,195,371,195,371,194,369,194,369,191,367,188,366,188,365,186,365,183,364,181 e|********* m351,144 l355,144,357,145,360,145,362,146,367,146,370,147,378,147,381,148,387,148,387,151 e|********* m342,170 l342,181,343,181,344,180,347,179,348,178,349,178,351,177,351,176,353,175,355,175,356,174,359,174,359,173,361,173,363,172,368,172,368,171,372,171,375,170,377,169 385,167,386,166,391,164,392,164,394,163,396,163,398,162,399,162,401,161,402,161,404,160,405,160,405,159,408,159,409,158,410,158,410,157,411,157,411,156,412,155 412,154,413,154,413,153,416,150,418,149 e|********* m555,119 l555,128,554,128,554,132,553,132,553,135,552,135,552,137,551,139,551,141,550,144,550,147,549,151,548,151,548,152,547,154,547,156,545,160,545,161,544,163,544,164 543,164,543,167,542,167,542,168,541,168,541,170,540,170,540,173 e|********* m535,190 l530,190,530,194,529,194,529,198,540,198,540,191,539,191,539,190,538,189,538,188,537,188 e[/whitepad]