临欧字，羊毫写在生宣上老是写不好

浪子燕青

羊毫写在生宣上行笔不爽，老师请劈劈啊，我这里感谢了

雪晴斋

够好的了，呵呵。捺的尾部稍加注意。

李庆元

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风之

没有力度。坚不直，捺软。整体可以。em1 em1

经天

书 为 分  冠  乎  不好   还有竖笔不好  笔力不够  继续努力啊em13 em13 em13 em2 em2

865703849

郡的悬针笔法不对，有些字有些倾斜，是坐姿的事吗？？？？

为人民服务

改用兼毫em1 em1

以歌

已经很不错
需继续努力！

自在砚池

注意结构，多读帖em2 em2

一也

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