刚才上不去,
现在又上来了!
很精彩!
章法,结字都很古
打印可在注意一下疏密和重点.
谢谢振国、陈风兄以及诸位方家的鼓励！
志林兄精心之作，祝成功！！
原帖由 吴邦志 于 2008-4-9 17:22 发表 http://www.shufa.org/bbs/images/common/back.gif
志林兄精心之作，祝成功！！
谢谢吴兄！不知您的作品准备的怎样了？
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***700;400;700,400;;#c00;12.75; m69,176 l69,177,67,199,120,325,123,325,127,324,133,320,135,318,135,310,136,309,137,309,137,308,138,306,138,303,137,303 e|********* m129,213 l129,215,128,217,128,220,125,229,124,235,122,243,121,245,121,247,120,249,119,250,119,255,118,256,117,259,115,262,114,264,113,265,111,268,110,270,110,272,107,275 105,278,104,280,101,281,101,283,93,291,89,293,88,294,87,294,84,295,84,296,77,296,76,295,74,295,73,293,64,284 e|********* m51,260 l54,259,56,259,60,258,63,258,66,257,68,257,71,256,74,256,78,254,80,254,83,252,84,251,88,250,90,249,93,248,95,247,98,246,101,246,103,245,110,245 111,244,113,244,116,241,116,240,118,238 e|********* m106,241 l119,241,120,240,121,240 e|********* m132,200 l143,196,149,192,158,189,167,185,177,181,186,178,191,176,197,175,200,175,200,177,201,181,201,188,198,193,197,199,194,203,191,209,186,215,184,219,183,222,182,224 182,228,183,230,185,233,191,237,194,240,196,243,199,246,201,250,202,254,204,258,206,261,207,265,208,270,209,276,211,283,212,287,214,292,216,299,217,305,218,310 219,314,219,326,215,330,215,331,214,332,211,334,207,338,205,339,202,341,196,343,195,344,193,345,193,346,192,345,189,344,187,343,175,336,168,334,156,328,155,327 154,327,151,324,150,322,148,321,146,319,146,318,143,315,141,314,140,313,140,312,139,311,139,310,138,309,138,307,137,307,137,306,136,306,136,304,137,302,139,300 142,299,147,295,153,291,161,286,173,275,177,271,181,268,186,266,187,265,190,264,192,264,193,263,195,263,196,262,215,262,219,261,237,261,238,260,240,259,243,259 246,258,252,258,254,256,255,256,256,255,259,255,260,254,262,254,268,251,269,250 e|********* m399,196 l397,201,396,206,395,213,394,222,394,234,392,244,392,291,395,288,395,285,397,282,401,274,403,269,408,260,422,245,438,229,446,223,453,217,465,210,473,203,481,197 487,192,491,189,494,187,497,186,498,185,499,186,500,191,502,200,503,206,503,213,504,228,504,237,501,242,499,249,495,255,493,262,490,267,488,270,485,271,482,274 479,275,478,277,472,277,472,276,469,270,462,259,459,250,457,241,450,220,446,210,442,189,442,179 e|********* m446,124 l446,126,445,129,445,137,444,138,444,144,443,146,443,153,441,158,441,163,439,170,439,175,438,179,436,193,436,251,437,263,437,267,438,271,438,282,439,285,440,287 440,292 e|********* m438,270 l438,289,439,291,439,300,440,301,441,303,441,317,442,318,442,325,443,326,444,328,444,332,445,333,445,338,446,339,446,345,448,337,450,332 e|********* m559,89 l559,91,558,92,558,99,556,104,556,146,558,157,559,167,559,183,560,179 e|********* m643,91 l643,94,642,97,642,98,640,101,639,104,637,109,635,112,633,116,629,122,626,126,618,138,613,144,606,152,601,159,594,167,586,178,576,190,567,204,557,221,529,256 516,272,492,298,489,302 e|********* m496,286 l496,292,494,297,494,306,497,325,498,329,500,335,500,334,502,331,505,327,508,321,512,315,535,290,547,277,562,262,582,249,600,236,618,221,632,213,644,204,655,198 663,191,669,186,672,184,673,182,674,182,678,188,679,189,682,196,683,200,683,223,681,230,678,237,673,245,667,254,659,265,630,294,620,302,611,309,606,315,604,318 603,320,604,323,611,326,626,332,652,333,680,335,695,350,679,362,679,361 e|********* m455,83 l455,95,454,97,454,110,453,110,453,119,452,119,452,125,451,125,451,126,450,127,450,128,448,128,447,129,446,129,446,130,445,130,444,131,442,131 e|********* m398,193 l399,193,400,195,401,196,402,196,402,267 e|********* m394,179 l392,181,392,267,391,269,391,285,390,288,390,292,391,294,393,296,396,296,398,295,405,295,405,294,406,293,407,293,407,292,408,290,409,289,410,286,411,286,413,281 414,280,415,278,416,277,416,276,418,272,419,271,420,268,420,265,422,264,422,259,423,258,424,258,427,255,437,248,446,239,448,235,450,234,452,232,455,232,455,231 456,231,459,229,460,228,463,227,464,226,466,225,468,223,469,223,473,220,474,220,475,219,476,219,480,215,481,215,482,214,482,213,483,213,483,211,484,210,485,210 485,209,486,209,488,207,492,205,495,205,498,204,499,204,499,207,498,209,498,211,497,217,497,224,495,231,495,233,494,234,494,237,493,237,493,239,492,240,492,241 491,242,490,242,489,243,489,244,487,245,486,247,484,248,484,250,480,254,478,255,478,256,477,257,476,257,475,258,475,259,474,259,473,260,473,261,470,263,470,264 467,264,467,249,466,248,466,231,465,229,465,226 e|********* m455,87 l446,87,443,90,439,92,439,93,438,94,438,96,437,96,437,109,439,111,439,221,438,221,438,227,437,228,437,244,438,247,439,249,439,257,440,258,440,267,441,269 441,270,442,272,445,277,445,279,446,281,446,291,447,291,447,294,448,295,449,297,450,298,450,299,451,301,455,305,457,308,458,310,458,311,460,315,461,316,461,340 460,341,459,341,457,343,455,343,455,342,453,338,453,335,452,325,450,320,449,310,448,307,448,305,447,302,447,124,448,123,448,118,449,117,450,117,452,116,456,116 456,140,455,144,455,157,456,162,456,279,457,280,457,313,458,314,458,319,459,320,459,328,460,330,460,332,461,332,461,343,462,343,463,344,463,345,466,345,466,343 468,343,469,341,472,338,472,337,473,337,474,335,474,331,475,331,475,330,476,329,476,327,473,324,473,320,472,318,471,318,471,316,470,315,470,314,469,314,469,312 468,312,468,311,467,309,465,306,462,304,461,301,459,298,458,295,457,291 e|********* m441,83 l441,85,440,85,440,92 e|********* m438,101 l438,103,437,106,437,109,436,113,436,162,437,164,437,211 e|********* m75,180 l75,183,76,185,77,188,79,193,81,196,81,205,82,208,84,212,84,214,85,216,85,219,86,220,86,225,87,226,88,228,88,229,89,230,89,231,90,233,91,234 91,237,92,239,92,240,93,243,93,254,94,255,96,259,96,262,98,266,101,271,101,273,102,273,103,274,103,275 e|********* m112,235 l112,274,111,275,111,283,110,284,110,285,108,287,108,288,105,288,105,291,104,291,102,293,100,294,99,295,99,296,98,296,97,297,97,298,95,298,93,300,92,302 90,302,90,303,81,303,81,302,71,302,71,301,68,297,68,296,65,294,65,293,64,293,62,291,62,290,61,290,60,289,60,288,59,288,59,285,58,285,58,282 59,279,60,278,61,278,64,276,66,276,67,275,69,274,71,272,76,270,80,269,82,267,85,265,90,262,104,253,110,250 e|********* m45,259 l45,263,46,264,48,268,49,269,50,271,51,272,53,275,55,276,55,277,57,276,66,267,68,266,69,265,74,263,75,263,77,262,75,262 e|********* m41,260 l42,259,43,259,46,258,53,258,57,257,62,257,65,256,70,256,72,255,74,255 e|********* m452,349 l455,350,458,353,460,354,466,358,469,359,471,360,471,361,473,361,473,360,475,359,475,358,476,357 e|********* m450,349 l450,353,451,356,452,357,452,359 e|********* m475,350 l479,346,497,319,504,304 e|********* m474,329 l476,328,480,323,485,316,492,308,515,268,523,250,530,234,536,217 e|********* m473,287 l471,296,471,300,470,307,470,330,471,330,472,329,473,329,482,320,487,312,495,304,502,295,509,283 e|********* m473,283 l472,290,472,304,474,304,476,303,485,298,488,295,492,293 e
感觉还是有的，但细微之处的处理还需要进一步的严格。
行气的处理也需要探讨。
加大对比度，注意字势。
可以换其他纸张试验一下。
泥金不好掌握。
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原帖由 太室尊者 于 2008-4-14 08:32 发表 http://www.shufa.org/bbs/images/common/back.gif
感觉还是有的，但细微之处的处理还需要进一步的严格。
行气的处理也需要探讨。
加大对比度，注意字势。
可以换其他纸张试验一下。
泥金不好掌握。
十分感谢薛兄的指导，我正在加紧调整。em13 em13 em13