肖鹤舞鸿飞之迹,玉润金生. 涂了一整晚，宣纸废去二三斤，我四处摸索，弄得五体倒地，最后六神无主，七上八下，酒来助兴，实在头痛。。。
观北居兄之大作，使我茅塞顿开。兄对书法的领悟，是弟所不能及的。
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[ 本帖最后由 北居 于 2007-11-3 08:10 编辑 ] 观洪兄书，清新典雅，酣畅淋漓。线条劲爽、干净利落不拖泥带水。结体平中寓奇不怪异。痛快之中有大气，轻盈之处见精微。起承转合，如行云流水，深得传统帖学精华。如能在章法上加以突破，个性上加以显现，将会更加引人震撼。学习收藏了。
（344701）江西省南城县万坊中学 熊新华
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观兄之作,酣畅淋漓,传统的东西很多,碑学的功底也很到位,只是小弟以为如果行书中的有些字在收笔的时候有所收敛或许会更好,有的时候儒家讲的"中庸"还是很有道理的.可否给我一本欣赏 下
地址:吉林蛟河第二高级中学132500 范永刚 em1 em1 em1 em1 em1 em1 祝贺洪主席!! ***700;400;700,400;;#3f6;9; m369,42 l369,45,370,46,371,48,372,51,373,55,374,57,375,63,377,68,380,75,382,81,384,88,386,94,388,101,390,107,391,114,392,119,394,133,396,139,396,156,395,160 395,163,394,166,394,169,393,170,393,172,392,172,392,170,390,167,385,149,382,140,376,123,372,115,367,106,362,99,354,86,350,80,349,80,349,110,350,117,351,126 352,133,353,142,355,150,356,159,357,167,359,175,360,180,362,185,363,189,363,191,364,193,366,193,367,192,368,190,369,186,369,168,370,162,372,153,374,146,376,140 379,134,381,129,383,123,390,111,395,105,398,101,407,93,420,83,424,80,429,77,435,71,437,68,442,63,443,60,447,54,448,51,450,50,450,47,451,45,451,37 448,37,445,40,440,42,436,45,433,49,429,53,427,58,427,60,426,63,426,79,427,82,428,84,429,85,432,91,432,96,433,96,433,149,431,155,431,162,430,166 428,171,428,174,426,178,425,181,423,183,422,185,420,187,419,189,418,190,413,190,413,189,411,188,410,186,407,183,407,180,404,175,404,172,403,169,403,156,404,153 407,147,410,140,415,133,435,113,440,109,452,98,458,93,470,85,477,81,483,79,494,73,498,72,506,71,513,71,515,72,518,78,519,81,519,91,518,99,513,107 510,112,504,120,490,134,480,139,476,143,468,147,455,153,443,160,437,162,425,169,398,186,391,191,379,201,374,207,370,211,367,215,364,220,361,227,361,237,362,237 362,236,363,236,364,235,366,234,368,232,375,227,389,216,395,211,407,203,413,198,437,188,459,185,480,185,493,187,496,187,499,189,501,192,501,201,498,207,495,209 492,212,483,215,476,216,467,217,458,217,454,218,434,218,434,219,435,220,436,222,437,225,439,227,442,232,451,244,454,247,458,253,459,254,467,267,472,277,474,285 472,299,467,306,466,307,464,308,461,310,456,312,448,314,443,316,437,318,428,318,423,315,417,312,411,306,409,305,407,303,406,303,406,301,405,299,405,295,407,289 410,286,412,285,415,283,417,281,420,279,424,278,425,277,436,275,439,275,444,274,455,274,459,275,462,275,465,276,471,276,475,277,478,279,482,281,485,281,485,282 e|********* m75,118 l89,115,94,113,99,112,105,111,109,109,117,107,126,104,128,104,129,103,131,103,132,102,140,102,140,103,142,103,142,108,143,109,143,112,144,114,145,117,145,200 143,202,134,202,132,200,129,200,125,198,121,198,118,197,114,196,112,195,108,194,105,193,102,191,98,190,96,188,94,187,93,187,93,185,92,185,92,170,93,168 98,162,101,158,106,153,112,149,118,144,124,138,131,133,139,128,162,111,169,107,190,94,197,90,205,87,219,79,227,77,234,76,242,74,248,73,253,72,275,72 277,73,278,74,280,75,281,77,282,78,284,82,285,85,286,87,287,90,287,104,285,109,281,117,279,123,276,129,271,135,266,140,260,143,253,147,247,149,237,151 225,151,223,149,219,147,216,145,212,143,209,140,206,138,204,135,204,134,203,131,203,122,207,118,209,118,212,117,221,117,221,118,222,119,223,121,223,138,221,141 220,143,208,155,204,158,199,162,181,180,178,184,174,190,172,195,168,213,168,256,171,272,172,278,174,283,175,287,179,295,180,296,181,296,182,298,184,300,185,302 186,302,186,297,187,294,188,290,191,283,194,275,195,272,198,267,200,262,201,260,209,252,210,252,220,247,225,245,226,244,229,244,231,243,238,243,244,247,248,249 252,253,256,256,261,261,264,266,264,268,265,269,265,278,262,281,261,283,260,286,257,291,252,296,244,301,238,304,234,305,224,305,221,304,217,302,214,299,213,297 212,297,211,294,209,290,209,289,208,288,208,279,213,274,214,272,216,272,216,271,218,270,220,270,220,269,221,269,222,270,225,274,229,278,232,282,233,282,233,283 e|********* m69,238 l69,247,70,250,71,254,75,267,78,271,78,275,85,289,87,297,88,300,90,302,90,307,91,310,92,310,93,312,94,313,96,313 e|********* m102,338 l102,340,104,340,104,342 e 不拘笔法，文人气息好，很难得，值得学习em1 em1 em1