sdny
发表于 2007-10-28 21:47
总体不错，但个别字仍透出功力较弱，力度不够，拙见。
张之纪
发表于 2007-10-30 00:30
悟性好的，半年是可以达到这个程度的。
滋泥
发表于 2007-10-30 09:06
不错
***700;400;700,400;;*3.75; m567,58 l567,56,568,54,571,52,573,51,576,49,580,46,582,44,585,43,595,38,598,38,598,37,607,37,609,36,616,36,619,34,631,34,631,50,632,53,632,61,633,64 633,71,634,74,634,109,632,112,631,114,631,116,630,117,626,117,622,115,616,113,609,110,601,108,594,104,590,100,585,98,582,94,578,90,576,87,575,84,573,82 573,80,571,76,571,74,570,72,570,69,572,67,576,65,586,65,588,67,588,82,585,84,584,87,583,89,580,92,579,94,576,97,608,97,613,98,618,98,618,100 617,100,615,101,614,103,612,104,609,107,604,109,603,110,598,110,598,111,597,112,595,112,594,113,594,114,593,114,593,115,592,115,591,116,591,119,590,119,590,121 589,123,589,136,591,139,591,141,592,143,596,147,597,147,597,148,591,154,588,156,585,157,580,159 e|********* m544,183 l540,188,540,190,539,191,538,194,537,196,537,198,536,199,537,197,537,195,539,194,539,193,540,191,542,189,543,189,545,187,547,186,549,184,552,183,557,179,559,178 562,175,564,175,567,172,569,171,571,171,573,170,574,169,576,169,578,168,581,167,583,167,585,166,588,166,591,164,594,164,597,162,630,162,636,164,641,164,642,165 644,166,647,166,647,170,646,170,644,172,642,173,640,175,636,178,634,179,628,183,625,184,622,186,617,187,608,190,601,191 e|********* m578,191 l583,191,586,189,598,189,598,190,597,190,596,192,593,195,592,197,589,201,588,201,587,203,587,207,586,208,586,216,590,222,601,233,605,235,605,237,601,237,600,238 596,239,594,240,585,240,579,238,574,237,568,235,566,235,564,234,564,233,563,233,563,231,564,230,566,230,569,228,581,227,611,221,616,221,616,220,615,220 e|********* m587,275 l591,275,591,316,593,322,594,326,594,332,595,335,595,338,596,341,596,344,597,347,597,378,596,375,596,374 e|********* m565,286 l565,291,568,295,570,298,573,303,577,306,580,310,583,312,587,314,589,314,589,310 e|********* m617,276 l617,278,619,280,619,286,615,290,613,291,611,293,609,294,606,296,604,297,602,299,598,301,597,302,595,303,592,305,590,306,588,308,585,309,581,312,578,313,576,314 573,316,568,318,567,319,565,320,586,320,592,318,598,318,604,316,608,316,608,318,607,318,607,319,603,323,592,331,588,333,577,340,571,343,568,344,564,346,563,347 561,347,561,348,617,348,620,349,617,352,606,354,594,358 e|********* m487,7 l487,27,486,28,486,32,485,34,485,36,483,40,483,41,482,42,482,43,481,45,480,46,480,47,479,48,474,58,473,59,471,60,470,62,470,63,469,64,469,65 468,66,468,68,474,68,476,70,479,72,485,78,486,80,486,81,488,83,489,85,489,89,491,91,493,95,494,98,495,100,496,103,498,105,499,107,500,110,502,113 503,116,505,118,506,121,509,127,509,140,510,141,510,143,511,146,512,148,513,151,514,153,514,165,513,165,513,164,504,159,498,156,489,150,467,143,457,139 e|********* m443,102 l444,102,448,100,454,98,466,95,473,92,479,91,485,88,493,85,495,84,496,83 e|********* m483,96 l483,97,482,97,482,98,481,98,481,100,507,100,507,101,505,101,503,102,499,105,497,107,490,111,490,112,492,112,494,113,496,113,504,115,506,115,509,117,515,119 521,120,529,123,532,124,536,124 e|********* m461,193 l461,194,462,195,464,199,465,202,467,204,468,206,469,207,470,209,470,213 e|********* m383,240 l388,240,390,239,393,239,397,237,400,235,404,234,407,233,411,233,413,232,416,230,419,230,423,228,431,228,435,226,440,225,447,225,450,223,452,223,453,222,457,222 457,230,455,234,454,235,453,237,448,242,446,246,444,247,444,248,443,249,440,249,440,248,441,248,445,245,450,242,454,240,462,239,475,236,476,236,476,235,473,235 469,239,466,241,464,242,461,245,460,248,459,250,458,250,458,252,457,255,457,256,458,262,459,264,460,267,461,269,461,271,462,273,465,276,466,278,468,280,469,282 469,283,470,284,455,284,446,281,442,279,441,279,441,277,444,274,449,270,460,264,463,263,478,261,499,259,524,254,525,254,525,251,523,247,521,245,518,243,514,241 505,241,503,242,502,244,498,248,497,251,497,267,499,269,500,271,502,273,506,275,508,277,512,278,518,280,520,281,525,281,521,282,516,285,510,286,505,288,494,295 e|********* m485,300 l479,300,478,301,478,302,475,302,471,306,469,307,467,307,466,308,464,309,461,312,460,312,458,313,457,314,455,315,453,317,453,318,445,322,444,322,442,323,442,324 441,326,439,327,438,329,436,330,433,333,431,334,428,337,427,339,425,340,423,342,421,343,418,346,410,350,408,350,402,353,389,353,389,352,388,352,387,351,387,342 389,340,389,339,390,339,391,338,392,338,392,337,393,337,394,336,401,335,410,332,414,331,419,330,425,329,433,329,468,322,474,322,473,323,471,324,470,325,468,326 466,328,464,329,461,332,459,333,457,335,457,336,456,336,453,339,453,340,451,342,450,344,447,347,444,353,441,356,439,360,438,361,438,363,437,364,436,366,436,367 435,368,435,369,434,370,434,374,433,376,433,397 e|********* m447,339 l447,338,451,338,452,339,454,340,460,346,461,346,464,349,464,350,465,351,465,354,466,355,466,358,468,362,469,363,471,367,471,369,472,371,472,374,475,380,476,383 477,383,477,387,478,389,478,392,479,394,479,399,460,399,445,394,443,393,440,393,440,391,439,391,439,384,441,383,447,377,451,375,455,370,457,369,458,367,459,367 457,370,455,374,453,377,452,379,450,381,448,385,446,388,446,389,447,389,447,388,448,388,449,387,451,387,452,386,454,386,455,385,456,385,456,384,458,384,444,398 e|********* m316,55 l314,55,314,65,318,74,320,81,324,86,328,92,332,97,335,102,339,105,342,109,344,112,347,113,348,115,349,116,351,116 e|********* m345,43 l345,44,346,46,347,49,349,51,350,54,353,59,354,62,354,65,355,68,355,81,353,84,352,86,350,92,348,96,346,102,344,104,340,111,339,112,338,114,333,117 327,119,324,121,321,121,309,124,304,124,301,125,295,125,294,124,294,123,293,122,291,121,289,117,286,114,286,106,287,105,289,104,291,102,295,101,298,100,302,98 307,96,311,94,315,94,324,91,339,88,341,88,344,86,350,86,355,85,366,85,366,94,364,99,363,105,366,105,376,103,382,102,385,100,392,97,395,95,397,91 397,93,399,97,401,99,406,101,416,103,419,104,424,104,415,107,409,108,401,111,391,114,365,123 e|********* m295,160 l298,161,298,162,299,162,300,165,302,167,303,170,305,172,306,175,307,177,307,201,309,201,310,200,311,200,313,199,316,197,318,197,320,196,321,195,323,194,324,193 324,190,321,190,319,188,317,188,315,186,313,186,309,184,306,184,299,182,295,182,287,183,285,184,281,184,281,225,282,224,298,219,306,216,328,208,335,204,350,195 354,191,358,186,360,183,363,178,365,175,366,172,367,170,367,161,365,161,365,160,364,160,360,158,357,158,357,160,361,178,362,187,362,200,366,200,370,201,379,201 383,202,392,202,379,203,373,204,369,205,364,206,358,207,354,209 e|********* m235,302 l241,302,247,300,254,300,264,298,272,297,282,295,288,293,295,290,298,289,300,288,300,287,301,287,301,283,296,283,295,284,293,285,292,287,290,289,289,291,288,292 285,298,284,301,282,303,280,308,278,310,277,314,276,317,273,323,273,324,271,328,271,329,270,330,270,332,269,332,269,334,268,335,268,336,267,337,267,338,266,340 265,341,265,342,264,342,264,344,263,344,263,343,266,339,268,338,271,336,275,334,278,331,287,325,290,324,295,322,298,320,303,317,306,315,310,314,315,312,319,310 324,307,329,305,334,301,338,299,343,297,348,294,352,292,357,290,363,286,366,286,368,285,370,285,371,284,387,284,387,294,386,295,383,299,383,301,381,303,379,306 376,308,374,310,372,313,366,317,363,318,361,320,357,322,354,323,352,324,351,325,349,326,345,327,334,327,331,328,325,328,325,323,323,311,323,303,322,303 e|********* m336,258 l336,266,335,268,335,277,334,279,334,283,333,285,333,292,332,294,332,311,331,313,331,318,330,318,330,320,329,321,329,323,328,323,327,324,327,326,326,326,326,327 325,328,325,330,324,330 e|********* m292,358 l299,357,304,356,306,355,308,355,310,354,313,354,314,353,326,353,326,354,327,356,327,362,326,362,325,363,325,364,323,364,322,366,320,368,319,370,317,372,316,374 315,374,315,375,314,377,312,379,311,379,306,384,305,384,303,386,301,386,300,387,300,388,298,388,298,366 e|********* m306,334 l306,341,305,342,305,343,304,344,304,345,303,347,302,348,301,348,301,350,299,351,298,353,297,354,295,357,294,359,293,360,292,362,289,367,288,369,287,370,286,372 285,373,285,374,283,374,281,376,281,377,279,377,278,378,276,379,276,380,275,381,273,381,272,382,256,382 e|********* m276,357 l297,357 e|********* m126,40 l127,40,129,41,171,41,179,39,192,39,197,37,203,36,207,36,216,33,224,31,225,30,227,30,229,29,230,29,231,28 e|********* m203,12 l202,12,200,14,199,17,191,29,187,34,185,41,175,59,167,68,163,78,159,84,159,86,158,87,157,89,156,89,156,91,155,93,154,94,154,96,153,96,153,97 152,98,151,101,150,103,149,104,149,105,148,106,148,108,147,108,147,109,146,110,145,112,145,113,144,113,144,114,143,114,141,119 e|********* m179,66 l186,59,191,57,194,55,195,54,197,54,197,60,196,62,195,66,193,69,193,71,192,73,192,79,191,81,191,86,189,89,189,99,187,102,187,139 e|********* m153,84 l159,84,161,83,178,83,178,86,177,86,175,88,173,89,167,93,164,94,154,99,165,99,168,100,175,101,177,101,175,103,171,103,169,104,166,105,162,107,156,107 151,108,149,109,153,109,155,110,156,111,159,111,160,112,156,112 e|********* m92,117 l92,118,91,118,91,121,92,125,93,126,95,126,98,129,100,130,103,131,105,132,107,132,110,133,112,133,115,134,120,134,123,135,145,135,148,136,157,136,161,137 236,137,236,136,234,136,231,135,225,135,223,134,220,134,217,132,212,132,209,130,198,130 e|********* m171,130 l167,132,166,134,164,135,158,140,155,144,155,147,154,147,154,148,153,148 e|********* m170,128 l171,128,171,131,173,134,175,135,179,141,180,141,181,145,181,146,182,146,182,147,183,148,185,148,186,149,186,150,188,150,188,152,189,153,189,160,190,161,190,162 191,163,191,164,192,164,192,165 e|********* m162,185 l160,190,156,198,155,201,152,205,150,209,149,213,147,219,145,223,144,226,143,228,142,229,142,231,141,231,141,232,140,233,140,234,139,235,139,236 e|********* m185,182 l200,180,205,180,197,188,187,196,180,203,178,206,178,207,179,207,185,210,187,212,190,213,196,216,200,216,200,222,199,222,198,223,198,224,196,226,196,227,195,228 195,229,194,230,194,231,192,233,192,234,191,236,190,236,190,238,189,239,189,241,188,242,188,241,187,239,187,236,186,236,186,233,185,231 e|********* m139,267 l151,272,154,274,159,276,165,280,167,282,169,283,170,284,170,286 e|********* m182,284 l165,284,161,286,150,291,148,292,145,294,143,295,141,297,138,298,136,300,134,301,132,303,130,304,120,314,119,316,115,320,113,324,109,328,106,330,106,332,104,334 103,336,101,338,100,338,97,341,97,342,96,343,94,343 e|********* m108,295 l111,295,113,294,126,294,128,293,132,293,134,291,138,291,140,290,149,290,153,289,154,289,154,291,153,291,153,294,152,298,151,306,150,312,150,331,151,333,151,337 153,344,153,353 e|********* m169,318 l185,329,187,331,187,330,181,324,181,323,180,322,179,322,179,321,178,321,178,320,177,320,177,319,176,319,176,314,183,309,185,308,188,307,190,306,193,305,195,304 198,304,200,303,219,303,219,306,218,306,216,310,214,312,213,314,203,323,199,326,195,328,188,328,186,326,184,325,183,325,183,321,184,321,186,320,189,318,191,318 194,316 e|********* m196,262 l196,291,195,293,195,297,194,299,194,335,199,355,203,366,203,376 e|********* m160,294 l161,294,161,295,164,298,164,303 e|********* m58,63 l58,67,59,69,59,71,60,74,60,75 e|********* m30,80 l38,80,41,78,44,77,47,77,53,74,58,74,62,73,62,72,63,72,63,70,61,70,54,75,51,77,49,79,45,85,45,101,46,103,48,105,48,106,50,107 57,107,58,106,58,103,60,101,63,95,66,92,67,90,67,84,68,84,69,83,70,83,70,86,69,86,67,88,62,94,58,98,57,100,55,101,54,102,49,102 49,103,39,103 e|********* m1,110 l27,110,28,109,30,109,32,108,35,108,35,107,37,107,38,106,40,106,45,104,48,104,51,102,53,102,56,100,59,100,61,99,65,99,66,98,69,98,71,97 77,97,78,96,81,96,85,94,113,94 e|********* m10,133 l9,133,9,140,12,148,13,152,14,155,16,158,17,161,19,163,20,165,22,167,24,168,24,169,30,169 e|********* m29,134 l30,133,33,132,37,130,37,129,39,128,40,127,41,127,43,125,44,125,46,124,47,124,47,123,48,123,49,122,52,122,52,121,86,121,86,127,85,128,84,130 84,131,82,135,80,137,77,143,76,144,74,148,73,149,73,150,72,151,72,152,71,152,71,153,70,153,69,154,69,155,67,155,67,156,66,156,64,157,59,157 e|********* m29,150 l29,149,32,149,34,147,36,147,43,144,47,142,48,142,50,140,51,140,51,130,50,129,49,127,48,126,46,125,45,124,43,124,43,199,40,199,36,197,34,195 30,193,30,192,31,192,31,191,35,190,37,190,39,189,48,189,48,190,44,194,43,194,37,200,37,201,31,205,26,210,24,210,22,212,34,212,40,210,47,209 50,209,51,208,56,208,45,211,42,212,38,214,32,216,30,216 e|********* m32,160 l58,160 e|********* m20,244 l20,250,18,253,18,261,25,261,28,258,33,257,36,255,40,251,41,249,42,248,42,241,41,241,41,239,40,239,40,242,45,247,57,253,53,253 e|********* m34,262 l33,262,32,264,28,271,20,286,18,289,18,291,17,291,17,293,19,293,21,292,23,292,40,284,53,278,66,269,68,267,63,267,39,279,32,284,24,290,19,295 13,300,2,318,1,321,0,323,0,329,1,329,12,330,20,330,30,327,46,323,53,320,57,318,59,316,60,314,61,311,61,301,59,297,58,294,56,290,54,288 53,286,49,282,47,282,42,278,40,278,39,279,39,280,38,281,37,283,36,288,34,291,32,295,31,306,29,324,29,330,33,341,35,345,37,347,43,351,46,352 49,355,55,357,63,357,63,356,57,356,48,369,48,372,47,373,47,375,46,375,46,376,45,376 e
悠然一盏茶
发表于 2007-11-2 19:51
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伟杰
发表于 2007-12-28 02:21
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爱雨
发表于 2007-12-28 09:49
佩服佩服！学习了。
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发表于 2007-12-28 14:55
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