枫桥夜泊zhg 发表于 2019-6-10 11:05

临智永禅寺，请各位指正

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承晋 发表于 2019-6-10 12:13

《智永真书千字文》字形把掌握的还可以，对智永楷书笔法基本掌握;但临帖的准确度还不够，多临几次，写好后和原帖对照一下，难写的字分析后再下笔，先过对临这一关，熟练后再进行背临，不久的将来，会拿下此帖的。

枫桥夜泊zhg 发表于 2019-6-10 12:14

谢谢指教！https://app.shufa.org/public/emotion/face_076.pnghttps://app.shufa.org/public/emotion/face_076.png

慕容季水 发表于 2019-6-10 14:10

点画上不够准，有的少了动作，应该和草书一起写，学习的笔画和用笔更丰富
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