行草觉 发表于 2019-5-8 22:38

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Sen森 发表于 2019-5-10 09:15

越来越精到！

行草觉 发表于 2019-5-10 10:46

Sen森 发表于 2019-05-10 09:15
越来越精到！

森兄过奖 请多指教

Sen森 发表于 2019-5-10 18:09

指教说不上，貌似尖笔多了点，重复出锋的笔画我觉得应该有收有放，放的太多容易浮，小楷宜凝重中见活泼，还有墨色也应有所变化，个人愚见，不当的地方请见谅

行草觉 发表于 2019-5-10 19:53

Sen森 发表于 2019-05-10 18:09
指教说不上，貌似尖笔多了点，重复出锋的笔画我觉得应该有收有放，放的太多容易浮，小楷宜凝重中见活泼，还有墨色也应有所变化，个人愚见，不当的地方请见谅

森兄悉心指导 拜谢了
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