Sen森 发表于 2019-2-27 07:40

早课 千字文

请书友指正
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第五只眼睛 发表于 2019-2-27 09:59

运笔有拖沓感，个人眼光，仅供参考。

Sen森 发表于 2019-2-27 11:16

第五只眼睛 发表于 2019-02-27 09:59
运笔有拖沓感，个人眼光，仅供参考。

感谢五兄点评，谢谢
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