Sen森 发表于 2019-2-17 14:11

每日临张迁碑

请书友指正
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慕容季水 发表于 2019-2-17 20:56

那个撇有个横拉的驻笔动作然后蓄力卡拉出来，不然笔尽头没力能完成这笔画的

Sen森 发表于 2019-2-17 22:19

慕容季水 发表于 2019-02-17 20:56
那个撇有个横拉的驻笔动作然后蓄力卡拉出来，不然笔尽头没力能完成这笔画的

好的，谢谢指正https://app.shufa.org/public/emotion/face_022.png

马培毓 发表于 2019-2-18 07:28

先生非常勤奋，值得学习。
略谈拙见，用笔不错，结体尚欠准确，比如，“风”字的外框，两边一长一短，“南”字的上面两个横左高右低，等等，没有很好的表现出来，结体过于平正，要平中见奇为好。

Sen森 发表于 2019-2-18 20:47

马培毓 发表于 2019-02-18 07:28
先生非常勤奋，值得学习。
略谈拙见，用笔不错，结体尚欠准确，比如，“风”字的外框，两边一长一短，“南”字的上面两个横左高右低，等等，没有很好的表现出来，结体过于平正，要平中见奇为好。

谢谢书友中肯的建议，我会在今后的临习中多加注意，多发现范字的特点，再次感谢
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